My Weekend
On my weekend me,my brother and Sister Evelyn and Oscar
went for a walk on Saturday. It was kind of boring. We walked
past a park and there were lots of people there so my brother
Oscar ran to the park. “Oscar came back” I said. He didn’t
listen so we just went and played in the park with him. At
the park there was a big swing, a slide and a seesaw. The
park was really big.
2 Minutes later. My sister was really tired so she went back home.
She said we can still stay here because the park was near our
house so we said “ ok thanks” And she left. My brother Oscar
was starting to get scared because there was no one there and it
was really quiet so I just put loud music on from my phone. But then
the song turned off because my phone died so we just went home.
Once we were walking home my brother was starting to run
home and then he fell. He was starting to cry. (About 2 or 4 minutes later)
Once we went home I saw lots of blood on his leg so I went to go
and get some plaster and put it on his legs.
He wanted to go to the park again and we said no. (About 10 or 15 minutes later)
I fell asleepš“. ( About 2 hours later ) Yaaaay dinner time. My mum
bought some pizza and made some hot chips for dinner.
And that was my day
Great to see you making huge progress in your writing Aaliyah. Ka Pai!!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Aaliyah, Well done to writing your story about your weekend. Keep
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