Why Is Swimming Important ?
Swimming is fun because you can swim with your family!!!! <3
Swimming is fun because you can swim in the water, play games with your friends and you can splash in the water.
Exercise is good when you are going for a swim because you can move your body to make your body active and you can have a race by swimming fast as you can to start being good at swimming.
Relaxing in the pool is good because you can cool off in the water because it is nice and cool, you can float in the water to relax and you can swim in the pool.
I think there should be a pool in NZ in summer so they don't need to get out of their house and then they can just go pools at the back of your house.
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